![]() And in literature this can be a bit annoying since the timeline can feel muddled but at the same time it is a more natural way of talking and thinking for the characters. Another are time descriptive where as vague as we humans often are a time can be described half a year that was two months to almost a year because our time memory often are quite loose. Like a colour if the shade are a in between a few different words can be used without the shade described changing. Usually in literature we acknowledge quite unnatural often that we used another word that definitely can be used but can mean something different. The thing is for the most time the details that I often gets hung up over with Sherwood's writing are details that either can have several descriptors so it's quite likely even with one character choosing a few different that are not necessarily indicative the same mental image on their own but together actually gives a more full image. still I'm nitpicking because I enjoy Sherwood's stories so well, and Toma and Amato always deliver so gripping narration. And a time where I get jarred out of the scene by a detail i either missed or forgotten. Still their could be a bit more editing both on the performance (a few time I'm pretty sure a lines are read with the wrong voice). I love Sherwood's sweet, humorous and light while including darkness. ![]()
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